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帮忙看一下我的英文日记
这是一篇写寒假第一天的感想,求大家帮看一下有没有不足之处,我一定改进.
Sat,Jan,22th.
The First Day
We were waiting for holidays at school several days ago.Finally,the winter holidays comes.Tt is an exciting news for us.
I will be free at home.The most largest diffrence between school days and holidays is like this.Though we have quantities of homework,I believe that I will finish it in advanced,anrange other time to do many meanful things.
So glad that I really dont know what to say.Maybe my own time always makes me deliighted.I imagine so many nice thing,such as computer,nice food,the scene with families and more.Maybe I will be more happier with them.
Out of fantacy,the fact is still in my eyes.There is a small hill which made of books and papers.No pains,no gains.I must try my best!
The first day,a special day.
这是一篇写寒假第一天的感想,求大家帮看一下有没有不足之处,我一定改进.
Sat,Jan,22th.
The First Day
We were waiting for holidays at school several days ago.Finally,the winter holidays comes.Tt is an exciting news for us.
I will be free at home.The most largest diffrence between school days and holidays is like this.Though we have quantities of homework,I believe that I will finish it in advanced,anrange other time to do many meanful things.
So glad that I really dont know what to say.Maybe my own time always makes me deliighted.I imagine so many nice thing,such as computer,nice food,the scene with families and more.Maybe I will be more happier with them.
Out of fantacy,the fact is still in my eyes.There is a small hill which made of books and papers.No pains,no gains.I must try my best!
The first day,a special day.
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