英译中,顺便改改语法It's 3 pm in Los Angeles.The sun shined over the g

英译中,顺便改改语法
It's 3 pm in Los Angeles.The sun shined over the giant Hollywood sign,making the cement ground hot and dry.
John,an unsuccessful carpenter,had been in LA for 3 weeks,and he had been auditioning for 3 weeks,too.Today he had only 8 dollars left in his pocket,and the friend who had been lending him his couch finally kicked him out in morning."I won't be able to afford both a burger and a bed tonight." John said to himself.He was overwhelmed with frustration and despair now.Suddenly,a shiny sports car with a sign that he couldn't recognize,rushed by him at the street corner,which almost knocked him down.The car even didn't slow down a bit.John watched the pretty girls in it drove away,laughing.He recalled the reason that he left his hometown for LA:to become a movie star and drive a car just like that.He also recalled the moment that he threw a wood pole at his boss,stormed out,and announced to everyone in town that he would become the greatest actor ever.
"Well,look at me now." John looked down upon his shoes,while standing at the intersect.They were worn out and all dusty."I can never get a part in these shoes." He took a step,but he was so occupied that he didnn't realize the signal has turned red,and a heavy truck was coming down the street in its full speed.With a disturbing sound of car breaks,John felt something was falling on him,a lot of somethings.Though he soon started losing his consciousness,John still could vaguely smell a scent of pine trees and fir that he's familiar with.
"Wood poles..."John tried to make a handsome smile with his last breath,but it was too small for anyone to notice.It's 3:08 pm in Los Angeles.The giant sign that bathed the hot sun,is reflecting an elegant silver light upon the hills.

这是3点在洛杉矶.太阳照耀在巨大的好莱坞标志,水泥地面热又干的.
约翰,一个不成功的木匠,已经在洛杉矶为3周,他曾为3周的试镜.今天,他只有8美元在他的口袋里,这样的朋友已经借给他自己的床上,最后在早晨踢了他.“我不能负担得起两汉堡和一个今晚床.”约翰自言自语地说.他感到沮丧和绝望和了.突然,一个闪亮的跑车有迹象表明他不承认,冲他在街的拐角处,几乎把他打倒在地.这辆车甚至没开慢一点.约翰看漂亮的姑娘在它开走了,笑了.他回忆起当时的原因,他离开家乡去拉:要成为一个电影明星和驾驶一辆车,就这样.他还回忆的那一刻起,他就把木杆他的老板,如在公告中,每个城镇,他会成为最伟大的演员.
“哦,看看我吧.”约翰瞧不起他的鞋子,而站在这个相交.他们都破了,所有的尘土.“我在这双鞋.”他花了一步,但是他很忙,他didnn不能实现的信号已经变成了红色,一辆重型卡车是街口在其全速运行.汽车的声音和不安,约翰感到有东西被打破,很多落在他的某事虽然他很快开始失去意识,约翰仍然可以含糊的芳香气味是松树和枞树,他很熟悉.
“木两极…"约翰设法使一个英俊的微笑和他的最后一口气,但它太小了,有人来通知.这是3:08点在洛杉矶.巨大的迹象表明,沐浴着灼热的阳光,体现着优雅的银光在群山之中.