我准备想去美国读本科,写了一个高中校长的推荐信.希望大虾能提提意见.

我准备想去美国读本科,写了一个高中校长的推荐信.希望大虾能提提意见.
To Whom this May Concern,
It is my pleasure to recommend XXXXX for undergraduate study at your University.I have known xxxx since he first arrived at college.I am the president of his high school.He has been a tremendous student and active social worker in school.I would like to take this opportunity to recommend XXXXX for your undergraduate program.
I feel confident that he will continue to succeed in his studies.XXXXX is a dedicated student and thus far his grades have been exemplary.In class,because of his hard working attitude,he has earned a lot of respect from his classmates.Not only had he did a good job in study but also in some others.He once has chosen as the representative of Chinese students to visit Japan.He also did a good job during the big celebrate in our province.And he is the sponsor of the ping-pong club in our school.I still remember the sight he applied for the club,and persuaded students to join this club.I appreciate to what he had devoted to enrich students’ life after classes.
It is for these reasons that I offer high recommendations for XXXX without reservation.His abilities will truly be an asset to your university.If you have any questions regarding this recommendation,please do not hesitate to contact me by +86-XXXXXX
Sincerely,
XXXXXXX
president of XXXXX high school

===Sample Letter of Recommendation===
To Whom It May Concern:
I have had the distinct pleasure of having Kaya Stone as a student in my debate classes and on my debate team for three years at Eastern Little Hope High School.Kaya has been more than the ideal student.In order to achieve the highest grades and my deepest respect,she has demonstrated outstanding leadership and maintained a clear sense of purpose.
The academics at Eastern Little Hope are most challenging,and Kaya fulfilled all the requirements with the added challenge of honors and advanced courses.Kaya is an outstanding extemporaneous speaker and debater.She has won many awards on the speech and debate circuits,and qualified for national tournaments.Success in these interscholastic activities requires extensive research and persuasive skills.Kaya also holds the degree of Special Distinction,as a member of the National Forensic League.
Due to its nature of metro,state,and national interscholastic competition,the successful high school forensics student serves by not only representing his or her school but also by representing his or her community as well.One of the requirements in my advanced class is to prepare lectures and guidance for the beginners.With Kaya’ s superior knowledge and involvement in the political sciences,she developed a strong sense of confidence with a charming attitude.Therefore,I could always depend on her to set the best example as an instructor.Because of her natural leadership abilities,Kaya was selected as our Debate Captain.On account of her mature approach to her responsibilities,I often thought of Kaya as a colleague.
Since her classmates,my fellow teachers,and I will always hold her in the highest esteem,I sincerely recommend Kaya Stone as the ideal candidate for matriculation at Eastern Little Hope State.
Respectfully submitted,
Dan Peel,Ph.D.