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请英语高手帮我修改一下下面的英语短文,使之通顺,减少语法错误

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请英语高手帮我修改一下下面的英语短文,使之通顺,减少语法错误
Talking about spending the weekend
In the mainland of China,it’s very different from the overseas spending the weakend.If we speaks of extremes:the worst condition was in the Great Culture Revolution; the best is in the period of the reformation and opening.During the Great Culture Revolution,in fact,people hadn’t any relaxed weekend,because the class struggle was endless and people lived in a hard life.In school or university,even there were no holidays or the holidays were very short.Once a year,the winter holiday only had five days in the university in which I was working.At that time,my wife and I lived in two places,the three numbers of my family couldn’t get together during the days of the Spring festival.On thet New Year’s Eve,I was alone in our singles dormitory,when the firecrackers sound rang in my ears,I wept bitterly.
At last,the Chinese people are in the new times of the reformation and opening.Now we have the double-rest days.We can watch TV ,listen to CDs,go on Net or appreciate video at home; and there are also many places where we can take part in indoor or outdoor activities an the weekend.We believe that our weekend will be much better than before.
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请英语高手帮我修改一下下面的英语短文,使之通顺,减少语法错误
1.it’s very different from the overseas spending the weakend.
spending 改成to spend 做形式主语
2.If we speaks of extremes:
speaks?we 做主语谓语动词用复数speak
3.people hadn’t any relaxed weekend,
这里面的had 是实义动词have的过去式,不能像助动词那么用,要用didn't have
4.even there were no holidays or the holidays were very short.
这个是两句话并列,不是两个名词词组在否定句里并列,所以不用or 改成and
5.the winter holiday only had five days
had改成lasted持续更通顺
6.my wife and I lived in two places,the three numbers of my family couldn’t get together during the days of the Spring festival.
两句话间要加连词,可以用so that,以至于的意思
7.改革开放好像是reform and opening up,官方说法不记得了.不过你用的应该也可以吧
8.there are also many places where we can take part in indoor or outdoor activities an the weekend
at the weekend吧,笔误了.
应该就这些,话说你那补充的问题什么意思?