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请大家帮忙修改这篇英语作文
Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavorite star is Zhang Jie.Because he worked very hard.I like animals.My favorite animais are cats.Because they are cute.This is me.Thank you for listening.
哪里出现了语法错误,我会及时改正.
Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavorite star is Zhang Jie.Because he worked very hard.I like animals.My favorite animais are cats.Because they are cute.This is me.Thank you for listening.
哪里出现了语法错误,我会及时改正.
前面都可以,只是这句But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired. 不能说体育太累了,应该说我上体育课太累了,所以应该改成I don't like P.E. Because I feel very tired in this subject (lesson). 其他的都还可以.挺好的自我介绍.
希望能帮到你,祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O
希望能帮到你,祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O