大师作文网求精通英语的高手帮忙修改下文章里的语法错误、一篇很简单的文章、、、在线等、、谢谢饿
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求精通英语的高手帮忙修改下文章里的语法错误、一篇很简单的文章、、、在线等、、谢谢饿
In our life, there are many difficult things, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone will finish them. It depend on whether you have a strong determination. In my life, there are many difficult things, but I will finish them.
\x05Painting is the hardest thing for me but I like to paint. In China, I am a art students, I studied painting for three years. My teacher said I can not draw very well because my eyes. I am a color weakness, but this is not serious.
\x05I am not a color-blindness, I just can not distinguish between similar colors.
I believe I can draw well. I did a lot of practice to become familiar with color and pasted color name on the bottle. Finally I passed the professional examination.
\x05Painting is the hardest thing for me. I believe I can draw well and I like to draw a picture. I believe if I do a lot of practice, I will draw. Now, I can not become a painter, but I am successful.
求详细修改
In our life, there are many difficult things, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone will finish them. It depend on whether you have a strong determination. In my life, there are many difficult things, but I will finish them.
\x05Painting is the hardest thing for me but I like to paint. In China, I am a art students, I studied painting for three years. My teacher said I can not draw very well because my eyes. I am a color weakness, but this is not serious.
\x05I am not a color-blindness, I just can not distinguish between similar colors.
I believe I can draw well. I did a lot of practice to become familiar with color and pasted color name on the bottle. Finally I passed the professional examination.
\x05Painting is the hardest thing for me. I believe I can draw well and I like to draw a picture. I believe if I do a lot of practice, I will draw. Now, I can not become a painter, but I am successful.
求详细修改
depend改为depends\第四行a改为an、第五行studied前加have\第五行because后加of