大师作文网谁能帮我改下四级作文评下分
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谁能帮我改下四级作文评下分
look around,it is unpopular phenomenon that a great number of students do not pay much
attention to spelling.
a survey has been done ,50% students made spelling mistake due to the fact that people love to simplify words,like"you",people always type it as "u".and the remaining 50 percent said it goes to limited time that it is impossible to focus more attention on spelling than on reading or listening.
to sum up,we expect to change the fact.so we should learn how important about spelling and we have to consult dictionary telling us right from wrong as we are not clear about the word
look around,it is unpopular phenomenon that a great number of students do not pay much
attention to spelling.
a survey has been done ,50% students made spelling mistake due to the fact that people love to simplify words,like"you",people always type it as "u".and the remaining 50 percent said it goes to limited time that it is impossible to focus more attention on spelling than on reading or listening.
to sum up,we expect to change the fact.so we should learn how important about spelling and we have to consult dictionary telling us right from wrong as we are not clear about the word
1.字数好像不太够啊!会扣分
2.基本上是中式的中译英,没什么好的句型、词汇.
3.语法上马马虎虎,还可以.
45-56分之间.建议你弄本作文书来,好好看看里面的经典句型,其实你加了些好的句子,这个作文就上70了.我有好的句子
2.基本上是中式的中译英,没什么好的句型、词汇.
3.语法上马马虎虎,还可以.
45-56分之间.建议你弄本作文书来,好好看看里面的经典句型,其实你加了些好的句子,这个作文就上70了.我有好的句子