帮忙修改一篇英语作文Part one The school yardIt is an old school with a

帮忙修改一篇英语作文
Part one The school yard
It is an old school with a long history.My first impression of it is that it’s very beautiful and modern.The buildings are in European style.And they are in red and white.There is a big library named Yifutang in school.The student can also do homework there.
Our classroom is amazing and clean.Every classroom has a computer with a big screen,almost as big as a blackboard.The classroom is very bright because there are many windows and lights.
There is a big dining room in the school.The food is very delicious and hundreds of students have their meals there every day.And there is a nice fountain in front of the dining room.A wonderful playground is behind the Qinmianlou.Many trees are planted around the playground.We can play basketball,table tennis,football and badminton after school there.
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Part one The school yard
It is an old school with a long history.My first impression of it is that it’s very beautiful and modern.The buildings are in European style.And they are red and white.There is a big library named Yifutang in school.The students can also do their homework there.
Our classroom is amazing and clean.Every classroom has a big screen computer,almost as big as a blackboard.The classroom is very bright because there are many windows and lights.
There is a big dining room in the school.The food is very delicious and hundreds of students have their meals there everyday.And there is a nice fountain in front of the dining room.A wonderful playground is behind the Qinmianlou.Many trees are planted around the playground.We can play basketball,table tennis,football and badminton there after school .
Part two Our teachers
In senior high,we would meet some new classmates,as well as some new teachers.They are all enthusiastic.Let me introduce some of them to you!
Our English teacher,Ms Gu,is really capable (experienced?).She can speak English very well.We all admire her very much and want to speak English as well as her.She is full of energy,which doesn’t depend on the age.She explains things clearly and her teaching is well organized.In her class,we speak a lot and never get bored!She will be quite strict if we forget to do the homework.But when we make progress,she is happy and praises us at once.I believe we will improve our English with her help.
We have two head teachers.One is our biology teacher,Mr.Li.And the other is our physics teacher,Mr.Yi.Mr.Li is an experienced teacher.He always gives us some useful suggestions about studying.Mr.Yi often tells us some interesting things about physics.They are both kind and patient.We like them very much.
Our Chinese teacher wears a pair of glasses and he is a little heavy ).He is kind and always smiles.He knows a lot about Chinese literature.Our math teacher,Mr.Lei,is also knowledgeable.We all admire them.
Part three The famous students
There are always some famous students appearing in my school.In old times,there were many students,who once attended my school,who made many contributions to society.Such as Gao Junyu,the first Communist Party member in Shanxi province; Peng Zhen,a great statesman; Dong Shouping,a famous artist; Ren Zhigong,a famous physicist and so on.Now,there are also some famous students currently studying at school.Our school basketball team and our school orchestra are famous too.
Part four Our feeling
I think my school is a fantastic place to growup in.I’m deeply impressed by some special features of my school,such as its central location,enthusiastic teachers,famous students and so on.
My school is not far from the city center.Thanks to that,it's very comfortable and convenient to live there.
I was a little shy at the start of being taught.But all the teachers made me agree that there was nothing to be embarrassed about.I’m sure I’ll study better with the help of my teachers.
We can also take part in many after school activities,like MUN.I think these activities made study more fun.
I think we live a healthy and fun life.
Our school is “the beginning of the dreams”.We are going to sprinkle our sweat there in the following three years ).And we believe that we will reach the culmination three years later.We love our school.