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Our other client(Target and Familly Dollar) have encountered this same failure point,they also consider the marking required by UL 817,Para.14.6 is equivalent to UL 507,Para.62.1.13.,so they agreed to waive this failure point.
我们其它的客户也有遇到这个相同的failure point,他们认为同标识是UL817等同于UL507,所以他们同意放弃这个failure point
Our other client(Target and Familly Dollar) have encountered this same failure point,they also consider the marking required by UL 817,Para.14.6 is equivalent to UL 507,Para.62.1.13.,so they agreed to waive this failure point.
我们其它的客户也有遇到这个相同的failure point,他们认为同标识是UL817等同于UL507,所以他们同意放弃这个failure point
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Our other 【clients】(Target and Family Dollar) have encountered this same failure point【.】【They】 【all】【considered】 the marking required ...
our other client 后面加 s 因为你有多个clients
they also consider 改为：they (all) consider(ed)
我觉得你这里想表达的意思是：他们都认为,而不是,他们也认为 对吗?
还有时态应该是过去时,和后面保持一致,所以要用 considered
they also considered 应该另起一句.
Our other 【clients】(Target and Family Dollar) have encountered this same failure point【.】【They】 【all】【considered】 the marking required ...
our other client 后面加 s 因为你有多个clients
they also consider 改为：they (all) consider(ed)
我觉得你这里想表达的意思是：他们都认为,而不是,他们也认为 对吗?
还有时态应该是过去时,和后面保持一致,所以要用 considered
they also considered 应该另起一句.