请帮我改两篇英文文章Medical EnglishSome people believe that medical En

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Medical English
Some people believe that medical English is important for learning English.In their opinions,if you want to improve your English,you must communicate with other people in normal English and not use medical English.Medical English is special subject English and normal people don’t learn it.
But some people support that medical English is useful for us.Take patient（病人）for example,he must learn medical English in order to letting doctor knowing much massage about your illness.Second,English include medical English,if you want to learning English well .You should also study medical English well.
In my opinion,normal English include many things which of part medical English is.So I think our not only learn English well and but also study medical English hard.We will feel medical English and normal English is important too.
In the labour day
In the labour day,I was very glad that I went to shanxi province in order to see the view of the province.he he .The first place is the Wutai mountain which is famous of buddhism(佛教).I am very surprised that the mountain include a lot of hills and is about 200 square kilometers.The other sepecial is that it not only have buddhism,but else have lamasism藏教.I mean two religion(宗教) here.
The second place is the yard of Qiaos(乔家大院).Do you know,the houses are very small,but very clean and tidy.There are six yards of it.Hehe,you can know much knowledge about business man of shanxi province.At first,they must work hard and were not afaid any difficult.I think you know the programme .he he,If you were here,you have special feel.But if you want to learn more knowledge about business man of shanxi provience.I suggest that you go to pingyao old city(平遥古城).When you end this travel thinking that pingyao is great ,shanxi is greater ,china is greatest.
I have the pleasure of having this chance that I went to shanxi province,I though it has long history dating from primeval(远古).There are many stories here.If you have the chance you must are lucky.

pingyao old city(平遥古城).
pingyao ancient city(平遥古城).