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老师您好：蓝色字体是我写的内容请您评分谢谢！ 开放作文（15 分） 请根据下面提示。写一篇作文。词数不少于 50. You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. 
The picture said that once there were a person who want to get a big fish so he went fishing on a lonely island, then he caught a smaller fish , so he keep on doing. As far as I am concerned we should hold up to our dream .If it can’t come ture, we need to keep it on, like the person in the picture! In this way I believe that he can get a large fish some day because of his patient and keep on going. If we stick to our dream and never give up, we will do it and we will successes at last!
The picture said that once there were a person who want to get a big fish so he went fishing on a lonely island, then he caught a smaller fish , so he keep on doing. As far as I am concerned we should hold up to our dream .If it can’t come ture, we need to keep it on, like the person in the picture! In this way I believe that he can get a large fish some day because of his patient and keep on going. If we stick to our dream and never give up, we will do it and we will successes at last!
解题思路： 批改如下
解题过程：
1行.said ----shows there were ---there was 2行want --wanted 4行keep--kept 第二段3行 come true实现 第三段of his patience n. 去掉and keep on going 最后一段success n -- -succeed v. 文章角度和立意不错，但是里面出现了几处谓语动词时态错误。 分数不考虑书写的话，10分 希望你多注意时态和拼写，英语取的好成绩。 有疑问可留言。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
1行.said ----shows there were ---there was 2行want --wanted 4行keep--kept 第二段3行 come true实现 第三段of his patience n. 去掉and keep on going 最后一段success n -- -succeed v. 文章角度和立意不错，但是里面出现了几处谓语动词时态错误。 分数不考虑书写的话，10分 希望你多注意时态和拼写，英语取的好成绩。 有疑问可留言。
最终答案：略