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觉得老师打分太低,请求评析,具体一点,可以复制到您的回答里面进行修改,
At resent,it has a widly discussion on the local goverment's plant--BRT and overpass.There's no doubt that some people agreed on the project,thinking that it's a good way to solve the traffic problems and made people to leave more comfortable.Furthermore,it's helpfull for the Shantou's develoment of economic,inproving the people's life and imagicnation as a tour sity.However,some people surposed on it,in the opinions,the project causing the pollution of surroundings,and always give trouble on traffic.Besides,it will take place on some noise,which influented the citizen's calm life.

Resently, there is a widly discussion on the local goverment's plant--BRT and overpass. There's no doubt that some people agree on the project, thinking that it's a good way to solve the traffic problems and make people live more comfortable. Furthermore, it's helpful for the economicd eveloment of Shantou and inproving people's life standard. However, some people surpose on it, in their opinions, the project causing the pollution of surroundings always make trouble on traffic. Besides, it will cause some noise, which will have influence on citizen's calm life.
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